(中学篇)2018年第07期:例谈读后续写情节构建的问题与策略(浙江:仝亚军)一文涉及的教学内容

  

1. 2016年10月浙江高考英语读后续写文字材料
 
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
 
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away.
 
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
 
“Tom!” she cried. “Help!”
 
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
 
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling(滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
 
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
 
注意:
 
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
 
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词;
 
3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
 
4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
 
Paragraph 1:
 
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. ______________________________
 
Paragraph 2:
 
It was daybreak when Jane woke up. ______________________________
 
 
 
2. 2017年6月浙江高考英语读后续写文字材料
 
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
 
On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.
 
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that's a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn't a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.
 
Mac's heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac's bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase(追赶)。
 
Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he'd be easy caught up and the wolf's teeth would be tearing into his flesh.
 
At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn't think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.
 
注意:
 
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
 
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
 
3. 续写部分分为两段,每段开头语已为你写好;
 
4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
 
Paragraph 1:
 
The car abruptly stopped in front of him. ______________________________
 
Paragraph 2:
 
A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. ______________________________
 
 
3. 读后续写指导课材料
 
He met her at a party. She was outstanding. Many guys were after her, while he was average looking, shy and awkward. After the party, he invited her for coffee. She was surprised, but out of politeness, she accepted his invitation to go on a date.
 
As they sat in a nice coffee shop, he was too nervous to say anything and she felt uncomfortable. Suddenly, he asked the waiter, “Could you please give me some salt? I'd like to put it in my coffee.”
 
They stared at him with a strange look! His face turned red, but when the salt came, he put it in his coffee and drank it. Curious, she asked, “Why this unusual habit?” He took a couple of sips and replied, “When I was a little boy, I lived near the sea. I liked playing in the sea. I could feel the taste of the sea, just like the taste of the salty coffee. Now every time I have the salty coffee, I think of my childhood and my hometown. I miss it and my parents, who are still there.”
 
She was deeply touched. A man who can admit his homesickness must love his home and care about his family. He must be responsible. She talked too, about her faraway hometown, her childhood, her family. That was a really nice talk and also a beautiful beginning of their love story.
 
They continued to date. She found that he met all her requirements. He was tolerant, kind, warm and careful. He was such a good man and had it not been for the salt in the coffee, she'd never have really known him!
 
The rest of the story was just like any other beautiful love story. They married and lived happily together. And every time she made coffee for him, she put in some salt, the way he liked it.
 
After 40 years, he passed away and left her a letter which said:
 
 
 
两个续写段落的段首语:
 
My dearest, please forgive me for my cheating you all the time. Do you still remember our first date in the café? ________________________________ 
 
 
She was shocked by the letter, with the feeling of being cheated. ________________________________